
The
Windham Middle School sixth grader had just completed a group presentation for
Aaron Vachon’s social studies class, when Elizabeth Reidel from InvestWrite
came in to present Magoon with balloons, a certificate, a $100 American Express
card and a trophy. Magoon’s mother, Candice Pierce, came to celebrate with her
daughter and brought a “flat daddy”, a picture of Magoon’s father Staff
Sergeant Peter Pierce, who is stationed in Afghanistan.
Magoon
was one of four students in Vachon’s class who did the optional essay to
describe a product in her portfolio and tell about the service or products,
then compare the stock to a different stock in the same area. Magoon compared
McDonalds and Chipotle Mexican Grill.
The 20,000 essays were read and evaluated by financial services
industries professionals, according to Reidel.
“She
loves to write,” Candice said. Magoon would like to be a novelist when she
grows up.
“I’m
so excited. I really, really like writing. I’m excited I got to have this
experience,” she said.
Candice
had known about the award for a couple of weeks and had a conversation with
Magoon about the contest.


From
Magoon’s essay:
“Chilpotle uses
naturally-raised beef, chicken and pork, along with zero trans-fat frying
oil…This is a very salubrious alternative to quick and easy dining when you’re
on the go.”
“One of
Chipotle’s unhealthier competitors is McDonalds. But, while McDonalds may be popular it isn’t
the healthiest food choice...Personally, I feel that this is mainly because of
the fight against obesity in the United Sates.”
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